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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
When l first read Araby l don't know that what it meaning for?But after l read it again and again l know something about that.And made me surprising that l fall in love with it.What l especially like Araby is that it's device such as it figurative for his friend's sister description and so on. Araby reflect a little boy reality thinking about something.It is innate truism so there is no doubt that it can reallly move mostly reader .For that more the article have a large number of environmental describe and according to that reflection people mind. Although this article is really short and apparent superficialness , it can tell us a lot and make us know something that it quite important for us.So according to about the whole reason. I really quite like this article. Do you think so?what is your opinion about Araby?
