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2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:08浏览次数:6638
要求:
题目 看图作文:旅程之“余”(题目自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160---200 words based on the following drawing
要求
1.Describe the drawing briefly
2.Explain its intended meaning

3.Give your comments

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请注意词汇的拼写,同时保持灵活多样的词汇表达;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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A man,with a straw-hat,is toughly rowing a pleasure-boat in a lake where many bottles,plastic bags,food leftovers,sanck bags.There are also two tourists on the edge of the boat,looking at the map and throwing an empty bottle into the lake.That is why our environment becomes worse and worse. This is a phenomenon just like bamboo shoots after a spring rain.Thus,we have to take it seriously.According to my humble perspective,there are two reasons.First of all,the consciousness of protecting the environment is not deep on everyone's mind.We should always remind ourselves and other people that a beautiful condition is good for our health and our desedants.When environment-protection becomes a our habbit,we'll never throw the trash casually.Apart from,the government should take the resposibility to punish the guys who contaminating the environment.Just because there is not a regulation,people discard rubbish recklessly.If there were a punishment,people will thick first and act second. Do you remember the news which reported that a Chinese boy had carved his name on the Pyramid in Egypt?Such a shame! It's the time to start from ourselves.Weshould regulate our behavior to show a good sample to others.A small step for us,thus,a bigger step for the civilliant.For our brilliant future,move up!

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