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A man,with a straw-hat,is toughly rowing a pleasure-boat in a lake where many bottles,plastic bags,food leftovers,sanck bags.There are also two tourists on the edge of the boat,looking at the map and throwing an empty bottle into the lake.That is why our environment becomes worse and worse. This is a phenomenon just like bamboo shoots after a spring rain.Thus,we have to take it seriously.According to my humble perspective,there are two reasons.First of all,the consciousness of protecting the environment is not deep on everyone's mind.We should always remind ourselves and other people that a beautiful condition is good for our health and our desedants.When environment-protection becomes a our habbit,we'll never throw the trash casually.Apart from,the government should take the resposibility to punish the guys who contaminating the environment.Just because there is not a regulation,people discard rubbish recklessly.If there were a punishment,people will thick first and act second. Do you remember the news which reported that a Chinese boy had carved his name on the Pyramid in Egypt?Such a shame! It's the time to start from ourselves.Weshould regulate our behavior to show a good sample to others.A small step for us,thus,a bigger step for the civilliant.For our brilliant future,move up!