文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;请注意分段。
Whenever you go, you always see that some people eating food or drinking in public.but recently someone mention that whether we can eat food on the subway. Different people hold different views.some people claim that we shouldn't eat food on the subway,because this issue relation a man action,not only effect some people but may also bring some rubbish on the subway effect environment. but other people hold another opinion,they think their are eating food on the subway is right if i don't disturb people .