2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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According to the dates that we can summary some informations. Most the half median weekly earings in 2011have master's degree,professional degree and doctoral degree.But in the unemployment rate in 2011 .More than half are less than high school diploma ,high school diploma and some college ,no degree.thus ,education pays is important in the career of our life