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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13013
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
评语:

文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

Communication is an important way to connected with others for us.Communication can enable us to achieve ours objectives more easily.We can have a better understanding for each other,reduce unnecessary conflicts and improve the efficiency of cooperation. There is a case to stand this point.when my husband and I traveled in Affica in 2013,we meet many foreigner travelers,such as African,American,Germmany and other people come from all around the world.We all felt unsafely because we unknown with each other and even we haven't talked to others. What should we do?So communication could help us to dissolved this problem at this time. Finally we have a good time when we went home. From my perspective,at no time we should underestimate the power of communication.When we misunderstanding others,we should communicated with them and detect the truth.

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