题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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Human culture is based on the interaction between each person. People exchange goods and exchange opinions, that's how the society has been evolved. If everybody only live on himself or herself, there would never be community, nor culture. However, to be able to exchange with one another requires "trust". Trust is the most fundemental element of people's interactions. If you don't trust the person your dealing with, either the shop owner, Or a peron who live near by. Without trust, people can never exchange with each other.