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雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

发布时间:2013-05-15 12:07浏览次数:10585
要求:

Nowadays it is more convenient and easier for people to travel to other countries, is it development a positive or negative effect?

雅思写作主题:出国旅游的利弊,字数在300字以内。

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作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;复杂句采用很棒;过程性词汇偏少;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays it is more easier for people to travel to other countries. This situation made more and more people to feel much different foreign cultures and views, and also increased the foreign consumption. However, many consumers choice to joined the travel agency due to they didn't familiar with the country which they will travel to and didn't know speak English, but more travel agencies couldn't provided well services to consumers, which may cause much complains. Hence, we strongly appeal to rectified domestic travel agencies.

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