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雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

发布时间:2013-05-15 12:07浏览次数:10545
要求:

Nowadays it is more convenient and easier for people to travel to other countries, is it development a positive or negative effect?

雅思写作主题:出国旅游的利弊,字数在300字以内。

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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;复杂句采用很棒;请注意分段。

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Nowadays it is much easier for person to travel to other countries. This situation made more and more people to feel much different foreign cultures and views, and also increased the foreign consumption. However, many consumers choice joined the travel agency due to they didn't familiar with the country where they will travel and they didn't know speak English, but more travel agencies couldn't provide well services to consumers, which may cause much complains. Hence, we strongly appeal to rectified domestic travel agencies.

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