小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my good friend is very family,and have an ambition of being a businessman.He hope he can go on a trip every year with his girlfriend.As far as his work,he wil attempt build a company about light of led.He think there are a great deal business in market for led light.As a result,I should support his activity as your friend.