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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇丰富度要加强；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；可以适当增加副词的使用。
The chart reflects the relationship between education and unemployment. We can see that people with higher degrees are less likely to lose jobs while those with lower degrees, such as high school graduates, tend to be unemployed. We can draw the conclusion that education pays. Education plays a crucial role in social development and individual's life. For a country, it is by education that a nation's culture and knowlege can be passed on to the following generation. For an individual, with profound knowlegde one can find a desirable job easily. Besides, education may help us to be sensible mature and independent. In my opinion, education becomes more important in modern society. We should seize every minute to study hard.
