2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国小城镇的用电量

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The bar chart given above revealed that the consumption of electricity increased from 2004 to 2007.Especially in 2007 year, the consumption of electricity increased by 12.88% form 4.7 million kilowatt to 5.26 million kilowatt. From the chart we can found that the consumption of electricity almost increased year by year,and it increased by 14.4% from 4.6 million kilowatt to 5.26 million killowatt. The reasons causing this phenomenon can be listed as follows. At first place with the improvement of financial statues and life level, the electrit appliances become more and more popular.Some of these applicants such as television, referigeriter, air conditioner, computer, become necessities for people's life.Another main reason is the development of indurstry which depended on consuming electricity. We can draw a conclusion from above that electricity is indispensable for every on of us,and for being a limited energy source we should enforce the conciousness of saving electricity. Only by this way, the electricity can be used efficiently and make our life more conveniously.