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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；能够简单运用一些从句；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
be a sale-consumer , to be or not to be. goods for sale a widely used trick as we all know . but we are still willing to accept the honey-bombs and even more crazy about it, especially in college's students. to be a sale-consumer or to be a smart-consumer,it is a question. buying necessities in a sale is an action that violates our original desire. as a result, we always find we bought something shabby after a unwise shopping trip.furthermore,those bargains usually made in low quality.inevitably, they are possibly hidden troubles. it can not be denied that you are saving money through bargaining.but are you? purchasing in saving money leads us to over consuming . it is not a make-up however it is do make out in our daily life when we have luncheon with our classmates in kfc we use coupons instinctively with an illusion that we are saving money in fact we over consumed indeed. to use a coupon we have to pay for something we don't have to pay for . therefore it is absolutely a kind of wasting. remember we shopping wise rather than price ,we live for a better living not an extreme saving . to be or not to be? if i were you,i would choose the later.
