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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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From this graph,we can the differences between Unemployment rate in 2011 and Median weekly earnings in 2011.It is obvious that we can see that with the development of degree,the higher education you ger ,the more money you earn.No matter how your personality is great,the degree is the most important thing that you can get a good job first.
