2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；请注意分段。

Do you remember this story:two men were lost in a larger desert.Unable to tolerate the hot weather and lack of water,one of them decided to seacher for water while the other one who was exhausted waited his parter in the original place.Before his partner left,his partner gave him a gun to protect himself.While after waited for a long time,his partner still out of sight.He thought his friend had abondant him,so he killed himself with the gun.But,we know,his partner did appear finding his friend had died.It's a pressived story,but also we can learn from it that trust between each other is very important.Trust is the premis of friendship and communication,is a important part of cooporation as well as in family.So,it's necessary to maintain trust.