2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Nowadays,many products exist excessive packging phenomenon and it really makes goods more expensive which people have to spend more money on buying them.The reasons that cause the phenomenon have many aspects.One of the most important aspects I think is that the manufactorers want to get more interest from products.And in another hand,there are a lot of consumers wanting to get some new effects to satisfy themselves. It went without saying that it can increase the economic interest to factories ,and on the macroscopic view,it will make our country's economy more prosperous.But everything has two sides.There are more bad impacts on it.It will cause a great many waste phenomenons and it's a waste of our resourses.At the same time ,it will take people a lot of money to pay for goods.I think our country should take some measures to reduce them,and it is necessary for us to protect the resourses.