2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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From now on ,some goods have a kind of phenomenon of excessive packing.In my view,the reason why this phenomenon exist is that our mind become more and more inpeaceful as the development of the society.Not only can we take money-making into grantted,but we lose the mind to rejoice the journey.It was just the quick-speed that caused the phenomenon of excessive packaing. As far as I'm concerned,what we should do is that wo should learn to enjoy the journey of the pace and simplify the thing around us.Besides,rejoy the simple thing and learn to save money