拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
strong will There is an provoking and interesting paradox says though giving up smoking is not a hard work ,it can't be achieved.however ,my concept is con tray. As is often the case,if something can be done over and over again in a short time,it may only prove its easiness.in fact ,finishing a thing should do without strong will.Take Dengyaping as an example .if she lacked persistence depending on her personal physical quality ,she would not become the top ping pang player in the world .on the con tray ,many people who equipped with talent and offered excellent chances failed in the end due to the will shortage. so the next question is how we could avoid this dilemma?first ,we shouid set a great goal which can give us abundant energy to tackle the things.besides,you have no choice to make you persevering and patient .without this ,giving up may happen anywhere. Last but not the least,you should keep hanging on .because ,you know,no one can get you out of the ultimate success but yourself.