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文中词汇使用较丰富，学术词汇使用要加强；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；句式变化较丰富，若注意文中个别句子错误会更棒；请注意分段。
Money Value Along with rapid development of our society, people's daily life are also getting richer. Therefore, some people spend money as water, but there are people being careful with spending money, especially students. Regarding these students, I totally agree with students' ways to spend money, such as collecting coupons etc., while some say they are not smart customers. My reasons are as follows: The first reason is that as a student, their pocket money is form their parents, they have not the ability to earn money. So they collect coupons, look for group-buy deals if they eat out or travel and buy clothes in a sale, the way to spend money is equal to help their parents to reduce burden. As we know in China, bringing up a child is not easy from his/her born to grown-up for parents. So students saving money is helping their parents. The second reason is that from ancient time, China has stressed importance of frugalness. So, they saving money can promote the idea.
