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Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places? With the development of economic of big cities in China, there are more people in big citices who come from different place.In the meantime, there are different dialects in big cities , which lead to problems, for exeample ,misunderstanding and fighting . So some people believe that we can`t use dialects in public places. however, others go the opposite way.In my opinion, we `d better not use dialects in the public places . There are some reasons to explain my point. First ,we can`t communicate with each other because we can`t understand different dialects.a case in point is that one person coming from sichuang province meet a person coming from henan ,they can hardly understand each other . In the second place , one using dialect can defend others .as different dialect has different pronunciation . In my mind , we `d better not use dialect in order not to arise problem.