英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 专业八级> 真题> 2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10531
要求:
题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分68.5分
评语:

作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places? With the development of economic of big cities in China, there are more people in big citices who come from different place.In the meantime, there are different dialects in big cities , which lead to problems, for exeample ,misunderstanding and fighting . So some people believe that we can`t use dialects in public places. however, others go the opposite way.In my opinion, we `d better not use dialects in the public places . There are some reasons to explain my point. First ,we can`t communicate with each other because we can`t understand different dialects.a case in point is that one person coming from sichuang province meet a person coming from henan ,they can hardly understand each other . In the second place , one using dialect can defend others .as different dialect has different pronunciation . In my mind , we `d better not use dialect in order not to arise problem.

会员评论0个评论)
846869858
金币:8

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:87.5LONGJINWEI

人气:225发布:2013-06-04

得分:87.5714276417

人气:54发布:2014-06-19

得分:86.5李晓鹏123

人气:584发布:2014-03-10

得分:86.5シ顾赏梦乄

人气:65发布:2015-12-16

得分:85.0chri12stin

人气:69发布:2014-06-06