2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；作者能较灵活地使用学术词汇，但单词拼写要认真；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

Computer had been invented for making work easier for us to deal with.As known to us all,the first computer occupied so much room and resource that we cannot use it in our dealily life to achieve what we are eager to.However ,with the dramatically devolopment of science and technology,we have managed to use computer as a basic tool to streamline our time ,which is precious for the majority of the population. Computer make a lot to become reality which has made great diffirence to life.A fraction of scientists created smart machine ,in a large scale,bring a lot benifits to ordinary People.For example,we can turn on computer to searching some useful information to finish certain task better,or just learn more to add color to a dull routine life by hanging through the internet.Also,listening music or learning an laguage by registing a website maybe a perfect chioce for you to relax youself after a hard day in working. Although it has made our life be colorful and rich in pleasure and knowleage,the disadvantages of computer can't be ignored.Surfing internet has broght a lot of time away to keep ourself keep contact with work,that is to say ,it has somehow broken the balance beteewn work and relaxing period.Surveys took has all reavled the dedication in net of many teenagers,which can be another factors we should considerate. Just like everything has two sides,only we use it as it has been supposed to,can we add our a useful helper rather than a time consumer.