高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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I like playing football very much! Because I think play football can let me relaxed and comfortable!By chance,I picked a football up on the way,then I played it with my friends,therefore I was crazy about football. Now,I always play football with my friends and compared with them,my favourite football star is beikehanmu,so,I want to bacome a professional football player.