高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意；建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨；连词使用偏少。

The used of my hometown were liking those. once upon a time ,there were many green trees growing in the area .The river was clear with many fishes swim freely in it .the houses in there were simple ,the streets were very crowed .People used to had simple and poor life. Now things are change a lot .There are many high buildings standing in there and many stores had been set up .Whats more, all kinds of cars run in the streets .To make matters worst ,with the development of factory,the envirment is getting more and more worse .Green trees are declining .Fishes are dispearing . We only have one earth ,one hometown .It is high time for us to take actions to protect her.