2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

作者能较准确地使用学术词汇，拼写检查还需加强；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

There is a gaint spider net in the depiction given above.All of peolpe,who are in the their own circles,doing anything but surffing on the Internet.There is no comminication among them.The picture ust reveals the daily life of many people in the modern soceity. It's no doubt that the Internet provides an easier access to read news,buy tickets,take courses,etc.I definitely beleive the network has an important significant to most of us.Actually,it estimated that 50 percentage,more or less,of younsters spend more than 6 hours on the Internet,one day.Furthermore,some high school students,escaping schools,are addicted to the network,even die. It's a striking wake-up call to remind us to rethink our lifestyle.The economic boom not only brings convenient network,however,but also temportations of Internet and the lack of communication.It's a challenge for our self-controlism. We should control the surffing-time rational.Just like the traditional Chinese sayings goes,"Too much is as bad as too little."Since we spend more time on computers,we have less time to communicate with others. We can't live in the little space anymore,like the picture shows.It's the time to slit the net,the separation as well,between us.Go out of the little zone,we will find a more funny world,the real world.