2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

文章用词灵活多样，学术词汇使用也比较准确；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

There is a giant spider net in the depiction given above.All of the people,who are in the their own chambers,do anything but to surf on the Internet.There is no communication among them.The picture just reveals the daily life of many people in the modern society. It's no doubt that the Internet provides easier access to browse news,buy tickets,take courses,etc.I definitely believe the network has a crucial significant to most of us.Actually,it estimated that 50 percentage,more or less,of youngsters spend more than 6 hours on the Internet,one day.Furthermore,some high school students,escaping schools,are addicted to the network,even die. It's a striking wake-up call to remind us to rethink our lifestyle.The economic boom brings not only the convenient network,however,but also the temptations and the lack of communication.It's a challenge for our self-controlism. We should control the surffing-time rational.Just like the traditional Chinese sayings goes,"Too much is as bad as too little."Since we spend more time on computers,we have less time to communicate with others. We can't live in the little space anymore,like the picture shows.It's the time to slit the net,the separation as well,between us.Go out of the little zone,we will find a more funny world,the real world.