托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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I agree that living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people. First, the air of rural area is better than the city. County is generally planted plants. Plants transform from carbon dioxide to oxygen. County have no many cars, so exhausting is not so much. In addition, county has no many buildings, if exhausting has been produced, it will disappear as soon as possible. Our healthy is increasing well. Second, we have been relaxed in a life of quiet and pleasure. No working hard also may let us support to exist. We will have many space time with our family to deepen emotional communication to avoid unconcerned. In city, we are very busy to exist everyday, who seize few opportunities. We ever stopped to take a breath, it is possible lose our dominant position. So we lose time with family, increasing alienation among friends. Third, communication is not cold. It is communication by face to face among people. Like this, everyone`s emotion actual delivery to everyone, to avoid to exist of mistakes. Communication of face to face is better than e-mail`s or cellphone etc. Finally, some people claim living around a lot of people is better than living in a rural area, this is different of life style, but I think living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.