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With the development of society,internet has a great impact on interpersonal communication, most people are more favorite to use internet to communicate with others.Nowadays, internet has already become an important communication means in our daily life. There are many reasons,First,it can save people's cost in calling and reduce family burden,Second, it can chat with families or friends face to face,thus we can know our family's conditions through the monitor, Third,some teacher can teach students on the internet not to go to the classroom.However,as a coin has two sides,some cheaters use the fake information to communicate with them.If you can't identify the message,so you will be cheated, Personally,I think it's benefit for us to keep a good interpersonal communication,wherever we live in other cities or abroad,we can keep contact with our families and can see them through the computer monitor,All in all,it will play an important role in our life and give us bring a colorful life.
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