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句子错误偏多，建议修改；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；请作者注意词汇表达多样性，但请加强单词拼写的检查；可以适当增加副词的使用。
what's your name I think everyone has a name ,but dou you like your name ,what do you think about your name you chriest it or hate it ? some peopal hold that a good name can offenlly bring in good louk ,the name offen mean succeed ,porver ,possitive ,and so on but the others think that it dosen't matter great about what you are named every thing depended on youself , your hardness work you attitude to the life . In my oppinion a great name can mean a lot ,good name offen souds likely when someboday call you you will be happy or it can infulence you in same seeness way so I like good name
可可英语 - 划词释义
