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有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；有效的运用了一些复杂句；文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。
A good way to save money. Firstly,in my opinion,i think don't buy clothes unless in a sale is a good way to save our money.Because we are students now ,we even no incom,so,if we don't inneed we shouldn't buy so many clothes. Secondly,the views of mine is come from these reasion.We can not do anythiny when we in school to study,instead we need a lot of money to pay off our study fee.Most of us wihout so much money to goshopping or something like this.Save money is a important thing,we should do it from now on. In the last,i hope everyone could save more and more money and live a better life,Best wishes to you !
