小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend in my life. He is named Liming.He is a good boy.He like playing basketball with me at school. He has a couple big ears on his head,and he has a part black eye on his head. He like eating ice bar in summer , he very tall and fat .This is my good friend.