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I have a good friend. He is a handsome boy. He has a short black fair, two big ears, and a small mouth. He likes reading science fiction and he is good at playing basketball and football. He likes palying computer games and chess. His grade is so excellent that we all admire him. His favorate subject is Chinese and his composition is very good. He is going to write a book of science fiction.