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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36941
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;请作者增加词汇表达的灵活性,拼写检查也还需加强;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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I have a good friend. He is a handsome boy. He has a short black fair, two big ears, and a small mouth. He likes reading science fiction and he is good at playing basketball and football. He likes palying computer games and chess. His grade is so excellent that we all admire him. His favorate subject is Chinese and his composition is very good. He is going to write a book of science fiction.

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