托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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I do not think that snap judgments can never be trusted. First, sometimes we do not have time to think right or wrong, just know to do something. For example, old man or old woman fell in the street, we do not have time to think he or she is not a liar. The first feeling tells us to hold him or her, don`t let him or her fall. Anybody is in trouble, want someone to help, offer fuel in snowy weather. Second, sometimes opportunity vanishes as soon. We make snap judgment to catch an opportunity. If the snap judgment is right, we will charge many things. For instance, Mayun, the director-general of website Taobao, in a few years ago, digital business is not known for people, it is not well in other country. But Mayun had seized this opportunity with unique vision, who aimed students and white-collar. They are no time、 no space or no much money to go to the shop, they may use space time to browse Taobao website, look for good merchandise as a cheap price. Third, sometimes snap judgment bring over expective overcome. Like this, today I do not think to buy tomatto, but there is only tomatto in supermarket, I am hungry ,so I buy some tomattos, I eat delicious cake of tomatto and soup of tomatto egg in supper. This is a surprise. So, snap judgment can be trusted, because we believe that things is developed for well.