高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累学术词汇；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

my hometown these are two pictures of my hometown. one of them was pretty beautiful when i was a boy.there are many little green trees round it. some fish played in the river. the houses were old and the streete were not big. persons worked hard,hut did not get much money.but,that is ok! the another is terrible. right now