2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；能够熟练使用从句并合理分配；作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；请注意分段。

With the social and economic development,using the computer has become a tendency in our life,but it was also bring some problems,this issue has aroused people's concern.Every coin has two sides,on the one hand,using internet can make our life more convenient,for example,we can go shopping,reading,studying on it,On the other hand,we can not only know the global world taking the place of events but also communicate with our friends face to face through the internet.However,we should be able to see some bad news,some people use internet to treat people's money and affecting,making their healthy and psychological suffer sorrow. In my opinion,I think that it can make our life more fruitful and enrich,when we feel tired in a whole day's study,using the internet to listen to music can make our brain to release,and we can acquaint with more people across it.