托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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I agree that living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people. First,rural area`s air is better than the city. County generally grew plants. Plants transform from carbon dioxide to oxygen. County have not many cars, so exhausting is not so much. In addition, the county has not many buildings, if exhausting has been produced, it will disappear as soon as possible. Our healthy is increasing well. Second, we have been relaxed in a life of quiet and pleasure. No working hard may also let us support to exist. We will have enough free time with our family to deepen exchange in order to avoid unconcerned. In city, we are very busy to exist every day, who seize few opportunities. Once we stop to take a breath, it is possible lose our dominant position. So we lose time with family, increasing alienation among friends. Third, communication is not cold. Most people come face to face communication. Like this, everyone`s emotion actual delivery to everyone, to avoid misunderstanding exist. Face to face communication is better than e-mail`s or cellphone etc. Finally, some people claim to live around a lot of people is better than living in a rural area, this is a different way of life, but I think living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.