托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第39篇:玩游戏是否能教你生活

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I agree with the statement that playing games can teaches us about life. There are several reasons for my opnions. First of all, I think playing game can make us more healthy. For example, some outdoor games such like basketball and soccor can not only have fun, but also exercise. If we often go out and have fun with other people, we will be in good health without special physical training. It teach us that we should make our bodies dynamic. Second, playing games can also help us make more friends and build the team spirit between our friends and us. Some games really need the cooperate of the all members, just like the activities I already mentioned. If people want to win in the games, they should know each other and get along with other poeple. It must be very good to improve the friendship. There is a typical example of it. In a basketball competition, there were two teams. The former' s members were all famous and had gotten lots of prize, but they had never been train together. The player in latter group although not popular, they always played together. To everyone's surprise, The latter won the competition. That means the team spirit is important for a game and playing games with other people is good for building it. Playing games can teaches us about life, but we should know the good ways to play games. we shouldn't play games everytime. Studying and working is also important for everyone. That's all.