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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第34篇:一个成功的人最重要的品质是什么

发布时间:2013-08-14 17:05浏览次数:5599
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作文题目:

In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor?) that a person can have to be successful in life?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

一个成功的人最重要的品质是什么?给出原因并举例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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It is not easy for a person to be a success. I think the most important character that a person can have to be successful in life is self-discipline. As my opinion, self-discipline can help a person pay more attantion to somwthing that important to him. For example, when a student is doing homework, if he has a good self-discipline he will do what he should do without doing any other thing. It's also same for adults. If a person is involved working or studying he will be successful easily. That's all.

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