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作文题目:
In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor?) that a person can have to be successful in life?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
一个成功的人最重要的品质是什么？给出原因并举例子。
字数要求:300字以内。
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It is not easy for a person to be a success. I think the most important character that a person can have to be successful in life is self-discipline. As my opinion, self-discipline can help a person pay more attantion to somwthing that important to him. For example, when a student is doing homework, if he has a good self-discipline he will do what he should do without doing any other thing. It's also same for adults. If a person is involved working or studying he will be successful easily.Without it, people will be easily distracted, finding it hard to get focused. And that is surely not be helpful to get successful. That's all.
