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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第34篇:一个成功的人最重要的品质是什么

发布时间:2013-08-14 17:05浏览次数:5599
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作文题目:

In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor?) that a person can have to be successful in life?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

一个成功的人最重要的品质是什么?给出原因并举例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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There are many characteristics in the world. Some of them are honesty and some of them are sense. What is the important thing for them? Some people think the important thing is to be a good worker. But in my opinion, this thing is not necessary. I think the most important thing is to credibility and integrity, because a credibility and integrity man can get more and more lover. It'll help them. For example, a man is a sense, one day, he invite a person to his home to eat dinner. But he forgets this thing, in the end, this person does't mind what he say. So, be credibility and integrity is the most important thing for characteristic.

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