邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；运用了丰富的复杂句；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；请注意分段。

since 2010, Several incidents of school violence have occurred in our country, everybody is shocked. After that, people start thing that how to improve school safety. first of all, according to plenty of experience that most of campus violence due to relationship was broken, so the teacher should cultivate their student how to keep the good relationship with others secondly, the school should training security guard that improve the work skill as well as establish regular patrol system that make sure stopping any violence at anytime base on the above write, i think if we want to decrease the rate of school violence, we will keep educating student and establishing safety system together.