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"How time flies!" My roommates often highly surprised like this because they spend hours on Internet daily. I basically admit that personal enjoyment has occupied much time of ours, but whether we used them to do things we like to do rather than doing things we don't like to do, I think, is still open to doubt. Admittedly, people are saturated with a variety of entertainment tools, such as Facebook, Twitter and Internet game. These are so attractive that people are addicted to them, even indulging themselves. Thus, it's no wonder that many people, once they get back home, the first thing that they do is to turn on the computer, then logging in Facebook, Twitter or other social network. Sometimes, they even occupy their work time to concern about what happens around circle of friends on the Internet. Clearly, it's the personal enjoyment that distracts people from their work. However, there is no definite limit between the things we like to do and things we should do. Actually, a lot of things that have been considered as people like to do don't necessarily mean to be ones that we shouldn't do. For example, as the traditional view, students should go to school and study in their class since that's the thing they should do. But according to this view, Bill Gates and Mark Zuckerberg should be condemned, since they drop out of the school. That means they do the things they like to do rather than doing things they don't do. In fact, it’s doing things they like to do that helps them establish the famous Microsoft and Facebook. In this sense, they do the things they should do rather than they like to do. Given this opinion, what's wrong with doing things they like to do and have a personal enjoyment? Given this opinion, what's wrong with doing things they like to do and have a personal enjoyment? In conclusion, why not the whole society are more inclusive on that people spend much time doing things they like to do?