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福建漳州二中2012-2013学年九年级上学期期中考试英语作文附范文:保护环境

发布时间:2013-05-28 23:13浏览次数:1456
要求:

随着中国的发展,人口的增加,结果,污染成为一个严重的问题,而资源越来越短缺,做为一名中学生你应该如何做你力所能及的事来节约能源,保护环境。请你根据提示词,写一篇如何保护环境的英语作文。

要求:
(1)不少于80词; 
(2)提示词:should, save water , save electricity, turn off,  reuse , recycle , reduce , from now on,

用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

How to protect the environment? With the development of China and the popularity which is larger and larger, pollution become a serious problem. But at present the resources are less and less. As a middle school student, We should know how to do something we can do to save resources and protect our environment. As we know, there are many people don't have enough water. So we should save water. What's more, the electricity also need saving. In our daily life, we should turn off the tap after we wash our hands. Reusing paper is also a good way to save trees. We should remember three words every time: reuse, recycle, and reduce. Let's protect our earth from now on!

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