2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

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In the picture, we can see the expectancy is lower than the infant mortality in 1960, and the situation is opposite completely in 1990. It reflects that as the development of society people's life become more and more safe. I hold my opinions as below. If consider from the two time, we can see something special. There are so many disasters happened About 1960, them leaded despair to people. How to keep alive is the most challenge for person at that time, and it is more difficult to give a good condition to the babies.