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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5942
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

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In recent years, many young Chinese people come to rural eares to seek their career development due to the employment tension. As far as I known, only few of them have stayed in the countryside for more than three years. Rural areas is not as beautiful as it looks! Though you may breath some flesh air there, but you can not bear some inconvinence that you have already geted used in the city. For exemple, in some mount areas, there is no internet, no entertainment and no shopping centers. All these would made your life nothing. Furtheremore, people in the countryside are always poor than those in the city, so they always feel stressed and contact and conmunicate with them is not an easy thing. Living in the countryside, you will be longly!

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