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Nowadays, more and more universities and high schools are planning to creating a green campus because of the government policy. But from the new survey, we found that most of school just rebuild the teaching buildings and planting some trees. In my view, it is not enough to create a green campus. Because i think that the green campus means that everyone protect environment and save energy, rather than just green building and road. Have you ever think the school how to creating a green campus. In my view. To begin with, the school should make some systems to strict ban to throw rubbish on the floor or waste resources. Then, encourage students to create some new machines for saving energy. Third, lead all students to use green goods such as green bags, green chopsticks, green lunch-boxes. For students, you can keep cleaning your room everyday and don't waste any resources. Second, you can raise you awareness of environmental protection. Third, you can supervise others bad behave and remain others to decrease contamination. In a word, a green campus is very good for our health. Let's protect it together.
