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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:12978
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题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

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200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分90.0分
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者在句法层面做的很棒;文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒。

用户练习作文:

Small wonder,in judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above table,if we look hard enough,we can observe lucidly that it describes that the satisfaction degree to the jobs varies significantly among different age groups.It is evident that the staff aged between 41 and 50 are more dissatisfied with their work,compared with the staff below 40 and above 50. When seeing the not uncommon phenomenon,personally speaking,we have no better way to appreciate it than by exploring the three factors.In the first place,middle-aged staff is confronted with greater pressure from family,job and life correspondingly,they cherish unrealistic expectation concerning what they can get from job,which is far beyond their actual performance.In the second place,although they have accumulated extensive knowledge and abundant working experience nevertheless,there is little chance for them to get a promotion or a pay rise.In the third place,those staff have paid more attention to their health and the life quality,while corporate life deprives them of their opportunity to enjoy their life. According to the above discussion,so noteworthy is the dissatisfaction among the middle aged staff that we have no difficulty but can obtain a conclusion that it is necessary to take effective measures and create more incentives to eliminate the negative effects and retain those excellent middle-aged staff.

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