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Small wonder,in judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above bar chart,if we look hard enough,we can observe lucidly that it shows a striking contrast of mobile-phone subscription between developed countries and developing countries.It is evident that the number of users of cell phone remains stable in developed countries simultaneously,the subscription in developing countries has been on a dramatic rise over the past nine years from less than one million to approximately four million in 2008. When seeing the not uncommon phenomenon,personally speaking,we have no better way to appreciate it than by exploring the three factors.In the first plac,it is as the economic further develops and the procedure of industrialization advances that citizens can earn much more than before correspondingly,with the income steadily rising,inhabitants have adequate money to buy a mobile phone.In the second place,advanced technology makes it possible to reduce the cost of making a mobile phone,which transformed the mobile phones from a luxury into a fashion accessory.In the third place,in the final analysis,the operators of telecommunication cut down the rate significantly apparently,folks could use mobile phone to do many things including communication,doing business and even surfing on line. According to the above arguments,so dramatic are the advantages of mobile phone that we have no difficulty but can obtain a conclusion that the rising trend is bound to continue in near future as welll as mobile phones will have a far-reaching impact on both the individuals and society.