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【题目要求】
Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion.
【写作分析】
第一段：看电视是孩子们很重要的课余活动，有些孩子甚至对电视成瘾
第二段：看电视太多的消极面
1对身体健康不利
2 减少和同龄人以及家人的互动与交流
3 对智力发展不利
4 有些电视内容不适合小孩子
第三段：适量有选择的看电视有益儿童发展
1 增加知识，和探索世界的兴趣
2 丰富课余生活
3 和父母或同龄人一起看有助于更好的亲子或朋友互动
第四段：适量地选择适合孩子的电视节目，并且尽量和父母或同龄人一同看电视有助于孩子的健康发展，否则电视将对孩子产生消极影响。
作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章层次较为清晰；请注意分段。
Watching TV at home has been playing an important role in children's leisure time, which fills their life with joy and relax. However, a recent research shows that an increasing number of children are addicted to TV. There are some negative parts of watching TV. Primarily, it does harm to our health, especially the eye sight. Secondly, it cuts down the time we spend with our friends and parents, which may lead to metal problem.
