初中英语命题作文真题演练(41):My holiday

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Last summer holiday I had gone to Dalian. I am going to do some activity this summer holiday. If you ask me What is the my ideal summer holiday, It is traveling around the world. Why I love traveling. because I can know different people and see some famous places. I wish that we have two summer holiday in one year.