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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Going to school by Bus or by Bicycle There are basically two ways to go to school. One is going to school by bus and one is going to school by bicycle. Each of them has its own advantages. On the one hand, going to school by bus can save you a lot of time especially when you live far away from your house. Besides, it can also save some energy. Thus, you won't be very tired when you get to school. On the other hand, going to school by bicycle can provide you with a chance to make you stronger and healthier. As is known to all, cycling is a good form of exercise. What's more, cycling is a flexible and convenient form. To some degree, choosing which way to go to school partly depends on the personal character and favour. So, for me,I think going to school by bicycle is suitable for me because it builds up my body.My favourite way to school is by bicycle.