河南郸城光明中学2012-2013学年八年级上学期期中试卷作文试题

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My favorite subject Everyboday has favorite subject. Me too. My favorite is Chinese. It's intesting.I am vevry read Chinese book,and listen to Chinese.Speaking chinese all over the world.And I often prictice talking with my friend or my parsant.In fact, my grangfather also like speaking.What about you? and youaaaaaaaaaaa assf asfdsgg fthkhf ssafhhj,dfsgnbgdzdfshh jghjnhg